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Break down before the flowers touch the earth
Another light to fade away
Break down before the leaves find rebirth
In the tides of wind that bend and sway

Honor to dismay
Giving my life away


I will hide forever here
Waiting for your return
I will find forever here
And listen to my heart burn

Passion dismantles before my eyes
Taking away the reaper's guise


Like a melody from the sky
Like a symphony from the ground
I listen and hear the earth cry
To the deathsong which it's bound
©2006-2009 ~AllHallowsEve
:iconallhallowseve:

Author's Comments

"Sange," from what I've learned, is Japanese for "To fall as flowers do" so in this poem think of how flowers fall from trees. How they sway and twirl in the wind untill it falls onto the earth; scraping the ground untill it's burried in the dust...

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:icondigitalmemories:
short sweet, but affective, i like it :D

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Deepest regards. Fondest adrmiration.
:iconallhallowseve:
Thanks a lot.

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:iconhowaboutnot:
Wow, this is very good! I haven't seen many of your other poems like this, and you've mastered both styles

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be the initiator
:iconallhallowseve:
Thanks a whole lot, that actually does mean a lot to me.

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:icondigitalmemories:
np

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Deepest regards. Fondest adrmiration.
:iconlittle-blueshoe:
wow
neat word combos
i love the images of death tied to falling petal images
neat!

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"Yes, Eliza Dushku has said she'll come back if the stories are interesting. Which is just too damn bad, 'cause I had some really dull stuff lined up for Faith. Man, quality dull. She was gonna knit, there was the whole psoriasis arc, intense dandruff...

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