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Your blood pressed against my lips
I swallow the never stale embrace
Forever missing to the world
Yet still within your grace
The world becomes a darkened shade
Forever mourning their own fault
Yet within your light which will never fade
I live to call your name
Take the needles from my eyes
And wipe the scars away; no more shame
©2005-2009 ~AllHallowsEve
:iconallhallowseve:

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:iconhedwig00016:
wow, it has a way of capturing you with every line. the farther you go, the more oyu want to read on.

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all that up there ^^^..that was sarcasm
:iconallhallowseve:
Thanks a lot.

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:iconlittle-blueshoe:
I have no idea how to comment on this. I really like it but i don't know there is a strong pull of reality from this piece.

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"Yes, Eliza Dushku has said she'll come back if the stories are interesting. Which is just too damn bad, 'cause I had some really dull stuff lined up for Faith. Man, quality dull. She was gonna knit, there was the whole psoriasis arc, intense dandruff...
:iconallhallowseve:
Hehe, thanks, just the way it was intended, yet not at all. :yes:

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:iconallhallowseve:
Woops, not :yes:, I meant :nod:

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:iconaiyana-centauri:
I think this one has got to be one of your best. Thumbs up, all the way: This rocks!

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"Just you watch. I will become the God of Death once again... but right now, I need some sleep." - Teh Duo

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98% of teenagers have tried or smoked pot before. Put this in your signature if you like man sex.
:iconallhallowseve:
Thanks a whole lot. I like the flow of this one myself :)

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:icondiablong-buang:
:wow: i like the flow of your poem. its not stiff or boring or anything. i thought at first that it would be really, really dark, the way it started, but its nice to think that the scars will be wiped away.

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Don't look ahead, just run to me
Each step will find the next one, recklessly
We'll find ourselves on the safest ledge
Well pardon me, I couldn't help myself
-- Copeland - On the Safest Ledge --

*Letters-Words-Write ~writeaway
:iconclinicallybeyondhelp:
Wow. fantasmic.
Lovely wording.
~x~

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.This Signature Is Not Cathartic Cause I've Done Nothing Wrong.

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