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I hold in my hand
A being of light
I hold in my hand
My guidance through night
A silver new band
That protects me from fright
A shield of such grand
That shines ever so bright
A guide to the land
Protection from blight
Protection from sands
My guidance
                         My light
©2006-2009 ~AllHallowsEve
:iconallhallowseve:

Author's Comments

You are my guidance, my hope, my light. You stand by my side as I sing to you, for you. Lord I praise your name in the darkest hours, the most painful of tortures and most emotionally scarring acts. For I know you are with me, and that you hold my hand through it all to make me stronger. I come to you broken, and you make me whole again.

The italisized part is written by me. I'm a Christian, yes I am. I don't care what you think of Christians or your mislead stereotypes, if you have negative comments towards my religion keep them to yourself.

I wrote this as something meant towards praise, obviously. The first real spiritual poetry I've ever submitted to DeviantArt. If you don't get it, that's ok. you can enjoy the wording and poetic devices used. I like the rhyming, myself. Anyways, enjoy, God bless and Jesus loves you.

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:iconlittle-blueshoe:
That is beautiful
It really hits me and I love that!
The last line really ties it all together!

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"Yes, Eliza Dushku has said she'll come back if the stories are interesting. Which is just too damn bad, 'cause I had some really dull stuff lined up for Faith. Man, quality dull. She was gonna knit, there was the whole psoriasis arc, intense dandruff...
:iconaiyana-centauri:
It's really beautifully written!

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"Just you watch. I will become the God of Death once again... but right now, I need some sleep." - Teh Duo

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98% of teenagers have tried or smoked pot before. Put this in your signature if you like man sex.
:iconallhallowseve:
Thank you.

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:iconallhallowseve:
Thanks a lot. Thanks for the fav also, glad you liked it.

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:iconhowaboutnot:
This poem really grabbed my attention. It's very beautiful, and flows well.

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be the initiator
:iconallhallowseve:
Thanks. I'm gald it grabs your attention, I've been trying a lot at it. Thanks for the +fav, too.

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Better to die on your feet than live on your knees
:icondeacon777:
This is very well written; it flows so smoothly and carries such a message. I love
it!

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Withdraw a step away, just to find my self
The door is closed again, it's the only one left

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